谁能帮忙检查下英语作文?有问题的地方挑出来.I have a lot of good habits.I eat a lot of vagetables and some fruit every day.I helps with parents do housework three times a week.Then,I read English book everyday.I hardly ever drink mi
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谁能帮忙检查下英语作文?有问题的地方挑出来.I have a lot of good habits.I eat a lot of vagetables and some fruit every day.I helps with parents do housework three times a week.Then,I read English book everyday.I hardly ever drink mi
谁能帮忙检查下英语作文?有问题的地方挑出来.
I have a lot of good habits.I eat a lot of vagetables and some fruit every day.I helps with parents do housework three times a week.Then,I read English book everyday.I hardly ever drink milk.I watch TV one to three times a week.I sometimes eats hamburgers,and I usually drink orange juice.
谁能帮忙检查下英语作文?有问题的地方挑出来.I have a lot of good habits.I eat a lot of vagetables and some fruit every day.I helps with parents do housework three times a week.Then,I read English book everyday.I hardly ever drink mi
I helps with parents do housework three times a week.→ I help parents do housework three times a week.(不是三单不用加s,help sb do)
I hardly ever drink milk.→ I hardly drink milk.(ever是曾经的意思,不应放在句子里.而且不怎么喝牛奶是一个好习惯吗?)
I sometimes eats hamburgers→ I sometime eats hamburgers(同样的不是三单不用加s)
I have a lot of good habits. I eat a lot of vagetables and some fruit every day. I help my parents do housework three times a week. And, I read English book every day. I hardly ever drink milk. I watch TV once to three times a week. I sometimes eat hamburgers, and I usually drink orange juice.
I help parents do housework three times a week.
Then是然后的意思,你可以用Besides代替表示另外
hardly 表示从不, ever去掉。但是我质疑你hardly drink milk,以及看电视,还有吃汉堡跟good habit这个主旨有关系么?
还有,I sometimes eat hamburgers
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I help parents do housework three times a week.
Then是然后的意思,你可以用Besides代替表示另外
hardly 表示从不, ever去掉。但是我质疑你hardly drink milk,以及看电视,还有吃汉堡跟good habit这个主旨有关系么?
还有,I sometimes eat hamburgers
注意下I 是第一人称,动词不用加s
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help直接加宾语,把后面的with去掉 "help sb. do sth." “one to three times a week”太汉化了,可以直接写“three time a week"
其他的没什么错误了。sometimes”有时“可以放句中,也可以放句末。