英语作文哦帮我看看怎么样,语法有什么错误不before our eyes is a picture of a hot pot,in which many cultures have boiled,provided people with not only Newton but also Leonardo da Vinci and such celebrity as Shakespeare ,Mao Zedong an
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英语作文哦帮我看看怎么样,语法有什么错误不before our eyes is a picture of a hot pot,in which many cultures have boiled,provided people with not only Newton but also Leonardo da Vinci and such celebrity as Shakespeare ,Mao Zedong an
英语作文哦帮我看看怎么样,语法有什么错误不
before our eyes is a picture of a hot pot,in which many cultures have boiled,provided people with not only
Newton but also Leonardo da Vinci and such celebrity as Shakespeare ,Mao Zedong and Zhou Enlai,with a line going like this:cultural hot pot-delicious and nutritious.Simple as the picture cartoon drawing photo,the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as ocean.
英语作文哦帮我看看怎么样,语法有什么错误不before our eyes is a picture of a hot pot,in which many cultures have boiled,provided people with not only Newton but also Leonardo da Vinci and such celebrity as Shakespeare ,Mao Zedong an
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我也觉得in which many cultures have boiled 可以改一下.
但楼上貌似没讲清楚,many cultures have boiled in hot pot 怎么接前半段Before our eyes的呢
而且其实还可以再修饰一下,比如:
Before our eyes is the picture of a steaming hotpot ,which is full of vary essences from cultures both at home and abroad,ancient to modern.这样其实就概括性地描述了你例举的这么多例子.
既省下了笔墨、又很精炼.这些人物例子啊,可以在正文具体地讲.开头还是简洁明了为主,主要就是解决“图片描述”.
然后最后一句没什么必要,而且Simple as the picture cartoon drawing photo表达好像有些问题,语法一定要注意啊.
个人认为第一段引出delicious and nuturitious cultural hot pot 就可以了.
如:These diverse ingredients lead to a delicious and nutritious cultural feast .
那么晚才回你,不好意思啊~我一般晚上都会在的~白天有时候在 有时候不在.
Before our eyes is *the* picture of a hot pot, "an instrument" which many cultures have *used for boiling*, providing people with not only ...... 你的原话in which many cultures have boiled,因为前面的单词是hot pot...
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Before our eyes is *the* picture of a hot pot, "an instrument" which many cultures have *used for boiling*, providing people with not only ...... 你的原话in which many cultures have boiled,因为前面的单词是hot pot,可以改写为 many cultures have boiled in hot pot,意味着很多名族在火锅里煮了的意思。但这并不是你想表达的。我不太清楚你话的本意是什么,但我给你改为:很多民族用了这个容器来煮东西。
Newton, Leonardo da Vinci, Mao Zedong, Zhou Enlai, and even celebrity such as Shakespeare have all expressed a line going like this: cultural hot pot is delicious and nutritious. Although it is simple as a cartoon drawing, the symbolic meaning behind it is as deep as the ocean.
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你可以把你的作文写到百度翻译上,翻译成中文在看。
没有错误哦